Writing in first person

A client once told me that they don’t write in first person, whether it’s the singular ‘I’ or the collective ‘we’. I asked them why and I learned that it’s not corporate or professional. Like it’s a cop out used by bad writers.

I’ve always loved writing in first person. Contrary to what people typically assume, I think it lends a certain humility to the work I do. It allows me to say that this is only my point-of-view, welcoming others to contribute with theirs. Isn’t that the point of any discourse anyway?

I didn’t argue with the client. Removed the first person angle from the piece, filed and done. I’d also forgotten all about it until I read Anthony Horowitz’s ‘The Word is Murder’. Gosh, he takes the first person narrative to a whole new level. In the book, Horowitz is a character, writer, and the narrator of the story. The whole book is written in first person as Anthony Horowitz, the real person. He inserts a part of his real self into the imaginary world and walks us through it. It’s a bit meta, if you will.

If you’re a writer of crime fiction, there are very few ways in which you can kill someone that hasn’t already been done. Innovation in crime fiction mostly comes through form, and not the modus operandi itself. And Horowitz gives us a cunning and clever take on the form of a murder mystery. If you haven’t read the book, I strongly recommend you do. But the trick becomes stale almost immediately, because the novelty doesn’t carry to the second book in the series.

Perhaps, the grammatical person doesn’t matter so much, after all.


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Some blog posts are several years old. While most concepts are still relevant, the practical applications might have changed for the AI era. Feel free to comment, if you’d like to discuss what I think of it now.

4 responses

  1. Bharathy avatar

    I was always thinking about this, how writing in first person can reflect better. Now I have one more reason to try out the same. Also, a book to read to.

    1. Ranjani avatar

      Yes! Come back and tell me what you thought of the book, ok?

  2. Boobesh avatar
    Boobesh

    When writing a professional email often I have this doubt and mostly I go with plural ‘we’. I felt using we may sound humble and I may come out ya overconfidence or arrogance

    1. Ranjani avatar

      I’ve had this problem a lot. As a freelancer, I used “I” for several years. When I grew it into an agency, we were a team. It was no longer just me. So, continuing to say “I” might make people feel like I’m taking credit for their work.Now, I decide based on context. Something like “I believe” when it’s my personal opinion. And “We’ve incorporated your feedback” when it’s team work. It works as well as it can.

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